Today Im going to tell you some of the stuff I like doing.
First off Im going to talk about the food I like and don’t like. Second I will tell you what I like to do and what I dont like to do. Also what music I like.
I like eating Sushi .My favourite meal is scalooped pataoes . I don’t like tamatoes. I hate sprouts and avacado. I love eating strawberrys.
I like playing rubgy . I like watching rugby. I enjoy playing kicks. I look after my hygiene . I collect nintendo ds games .I go to every thursday night. I have a bed. I play with my rugby ball everynight.
I like the band green day . I dont like old fashioned music. I always watch Phineas and Ferb on saturdays.
First off Im going to talk about the food I like and don’t like. Second I will tell you what I like to do and what I dont like to do. Also what music I like.
I like eating Sushi .My favourite meal is scalooped pataoes . I don’t like tamatoes. I hate sprouts and avacado. I love eating strawberrys.
I like playing rubgy . I like watching rugby. I enjoy playing kicks. I look after my hygiene . I collect nintendo ds games .I go to every thursday night. I have a bed. I play with my rugby ball everynight.
I like the band green day . I dont like old fashioned music. I always watch Phineas and Ferb on saturdays.
Thank you Sione for reading my work and thank you for reading this post.
Nice of you to share this with us, TomJoe. Perhaps you and Sione coud get together to improve this post, especially looking at basic punctuation such as capital letters for proper nouns. (For example: 'Green Day' is the name of the band.
ReplyDeleteGood work, Mr H